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#1 July 8, 2012 12:59:58 AM

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(My First Fanfic!) Space for Rent

It was raining. Lighting struck every few seconds. My house had a spare room. My dad put it for rent. We got an email from "blocked ID" saying they'd rent it. Course, name's Angie, friends can call me Ange. Suppose you're a friend. Anyways, we heard a knock on the door, 'bout five in the afternoon. When I opened the door, well...

She was at my doorstep.
She who once was my childhood toy.

Rainbow Dash was on my doorstep.

I had no words to say. I had trouble picking my jaw up.

"Hay. I guess this is my new home?"


"Eeyup" was my reply.

I lead her to my trundle bed and held my fist out for a brohoof/fist.
So did she.



(To be continued! What do you guys think? If I get feedback, I'll continue!)

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#2 July 8, 2012 1:06:52 AM

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Re: (My First Fanfic!) Space for Rent

Pretty sweet, I like. :D


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#3 July 8, 2012 7:59:18 AM

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Re: (My First Fanfic!) Space for Rent

Lolkid332 wrote:

Pretty sweet, I like. :D


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#4 July 8, 2012 8:29:26 AM

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Re: (My First Fanfic!) Space for Rent

Haha, cool, I'm liking it! :D

Last edited by jukyter (July 9, 2012 7:43:19 AM)


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#5 July 8, 2012 5:16:48 PM

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Re: (My First Fanfic!) Space for Rent

Great, pretty good.

I can sense a relation to "My Little Dashie." I'm looking forward to seeing how you put together the storyline and plot.

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#6 July 8, 2012 8:57:28 PM

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Re: (My First Fanfic!) Space for Rent

This one seems interesting. I'm guessing this one won't end like My Little Dashie did. I can't wait to see what you'll come up with.


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#7 July 9, 2012 7:44:33 AM

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Re: (My First Fanfic!) Space for Rent

I'm not feeling this much like My Little Dashie. :roll:
More kind of a reverse HiE fic.


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