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#1 June 27, 2012 1:12:02 PM

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Discord's Legend

On fimfiction. I quite like it (well, duh) but it seems a kitchen sink at the moment. Rest assured, the mysteries will continue to pile up!
EDIT: In case it isn't clear, this is a fanfic I wrote. :P
I'm not entirely sure why Soniku was confused, possibly because it was a link instead of copy/pasted.

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#2 June 27, 2012 1:40:58 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

Did you made it?


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#3 June 27, 2012 1:58:21 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

Yeah. ;)


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#4 June 27, 2012 2:08:09 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

jukyter wrote:

Yeah. ;)

Discord fan. Pretty amazing.
















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#5 June 27, 2012 3:12:46 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

SonikuBrony wrote:

jukyter wrote:

Yeah. ;)

Discord fan. Pretty amazing.
















Did you forgot PP forums? There is a big poll now!

The mod elections? I've voted. :D


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#6 June 27, 2012 3:55:09 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

Your story's pretty good!
I like where things are going with Derpy's side of the story. However, a few parts seemed rushed and left me feeling confused. For example, I don't understand why Twilight randomly ran away from Doctor Whooves, and Doctor Whooves started chasing her. Otherwise it's pretty good. :)


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#7 June 27, 2012 4:01:56 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

jukyter wrote:

SonikuBrony wrote:

jukyter wrote:

Yeah. ;)

Discord fan. Pretty amazing.
















Did you forgot PP forums? There is a big poll now!

The mod elections? I've voted. :D

No,Should i make a sub-forum?


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#8 June 27, 2012 5:19:10 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

SonikuBrony wrote:

jukyter wrote:

SonikuBrony wrote:


Discord fan. Pretty amazing.
















Did you forgot PP forums? There is a big poll now!

The mod elections? I've voted. :D

No,Should i make a sub-forum?

Oh that. I saw the Announcement. I tend to focus on revamping the forums which is (almost) finished! ^^'


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#9 June 27, 2012 5:53:07 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

jukyter wrote:

SonikuBrony wrote:

jukyter wrote:


The mod elections? I've voted. :D

No,Should i make a sub-forum?

Oh that. I saw the Announcement. I tend to focus on revamping the forums which is (almost) finished! ^^'

yay!


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#10 June 29, 2012 7:37:19 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

Hey guys, this topic is about jukyter's fanfiction, not the Pinkie Pie Forums.
Back on topic please. :trixie:


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#11 June 30, 2012 3:22:11 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

Yup. Anyone (had to do that, or my grammar is terrible) read it yet? It has everything I like! :D
If someone comments on it (here or on fimfiction), they get a Derpy scene (or whatever character they like :D).

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#12 July 4, 2012 9:27:28 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

jukyter wrote:

Yup. Anyone (had to do that, or my grammar is terrible) read it yet? It has everything I like! :D
If someone comments on it (here or on fimfiction), they get a Derpy scene (or whatever character they like :D).

I already posted my feedback on this thread.
I can't wait for the Derpy scene!
I want you to make the part where Derpy gets Dinky back so emotional that it causes ME to shed tears of joy. I warn you though, it's hard to make me cry. :)


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#13 July 6, 2012 4:25:44 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

Sausagefanclub wrote:

jukyter wrote:

Yup. Anyone (had to do that, or my grammar is terrible) read it yet? It has everything I like! :D
If someone comments on it (here or on fimfiction), they get a Derpy scene (or whatever character they like :D).

I already posted my feedback on this thread.
I can't wait for the Derpy scene!
I want you to make the part where Derpy gets Dinky back so emotional that it causes ME to shed tears of joy. I warn you though, it's hard to make me cry. :)

Ooh, toughie!:D
I didn't notice your post in all of Soniku's posts. :derpy:
The reason some parts are a bit rushed is because I was trying to get it into 1000 words (minimum limit) and my chapters aren't normally too long. ._.
I really shouldn't've rushed it... ._.
Oh, and I started the next chapter-Derpy's subplot unravels a bit more! :derp:

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#14 August 27, 2012 7:27:53 PM

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Re: Discord's Legend

I like it so far!


My browser history and I go way back. B)

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